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$45 Just like the 10-pager, query letter critique is about so much more than the query letter. If you are not able to concisely answer the most important question: “What’s it about?” And my notes help clarify that, chances are there is still work to do on the manuscript. Writing is re-writing. Most writers are so eager to submit that they are submitting too soon. If your query letter needs a lot of reworking, the notes will help you discover where your story may be weak. The query letter is your first line of defense in submitting. I know what will make an agent reject it or request to see pages. Email: Mary@Immediatefiction.com Must be paid in advance